how to format your children’s book manuscript
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Posted by Cynthea on May 23rd, 2006 filed in downloads, submissions, writing basics |
THIS ARTICLE APPLIES TO ALL CHILDREN’S BOOK MANUSCRIPTS - INCLUDING PICTURE BOOKS.
Here’s what I do in Microsoft Word. (If you need a visual, an example is included in the book version of my Crash Course.)
Font and Paragraphing
- Twelve point font. Times New Roman. (Courier is another acceptable option - but that font hogs up the paper). Whatever you do, please don’t try to flag the attention of an editor by using splashy font. All that will do is make you look like an amateur.
- Double space your manuscript. How? - hit ctrl+A to select the body of your text, then go to the menu at the top of Word and select Format->Paragraph. A new window will pop-up. Under Line Spacing: select EXACTLY. Under At: enter “25″ Click OK. This will make your line spaces just over double your font size. And there you have it.
Page 1 Header information
You will want the header of the first page of your manuscript to be different than the rest of the manuscript. To accomplish this, go to File->Page Setup. Then click on the Layout tab. Check the Different First Page box.Now go to the first page of your document and put your contact information in the HEADER.
- To get to the header, from the menu up top, click View->Header and Footer. Your header will “open” on the page.
- On the left side, enter your first and last name. Hit enter.
- Enter your street address. Hit enter.
- Enter you city, state and zip. Hit enter.
- Enter your phone number. Hit enter.
- Then your email address. Hit enter.
On the right side, you’ll want to specify your word count. Like “Word Count~ 500″. To place this statement on the first line of your header, you’ll need to set a Right Tab.
- To do this, click on that first line after your last name so your cursor is there. Then select from the menu Format->Tab. A pop-up window will appear. Under Tab Stop Position: enter 6″. Under Alignment, click on Right. Then click the SET button in that window.
- Now hit the tab key on your keyboard and notice what happens. Your cursor will flush right.
- Enter your word count and click out of the header.
Title your work
Now hit Enter 10-12 times- you should be about half-way down the page. Enter your title in all caps. NO BOLDING. NO UNDERLINE. I never bother with a byline since it’s assumed from the header. Hit enter twice and begin. And please, DO NOT PUT A COPYRIGHT on there. There is no need and some say, the appearance of a copyright on the manuscript will flag you as an amateur. Want to know why? Your text is automatically copyrighted as soon as you write it. So putting the symbol on your document only points out to an editor or an agent that you might not know this. If you want to know more on copyright, read this from Wikipedia.
Chapter Titles for Chaptered Books
If your book is chaptered, center the chapter title and write “CHAPTER ONE–CHAPTER TITLE” in all caps.
Then hit enter twice again. Your subsequent chapters should each begin a new page, so learn how to insert a page break. Select Insert-> Break. Click Page Break. Done. Eight hits to the enter key will be where you start with the chapter title. Two Enters to start the text.
Your story text
Indent paragraphs. To indent, it’s as simple as hitting the Tab key on your keyboard. Please don’t hit the space bar five times. This is a real pain in the neck and totally unnecessary. This was the old school way of doing things before the arrival of the personal computer.
The same goes for spacing between sentences. ONE SPACE is the standard now. Two spaces is what you do on a typewriter. So with that in mind, if you ARE using a typewriter, then follow the old rules. But everything I am describing here assumes we have a computer and we’re using Word or Works.
Do not double-space (hit enter key twice) between paragraphs unless this is intentional for your story-telling.
Slug and Page Numbers
On page 2 and every page thereafter, a slug (your last name, a slash, then keywords from the title) and a page number should appear in the header. To do this, click into the header as described before.
- Enter your SLUG in the upper left. This is LAST NAME / KEYWORDS FROM TITLE. Like LIU / JOHNNY’S DAY OFF
- Next, insert a page number by setting a right tab like we did before and clicking the # icon in the header/footer toolbar.
Now your slug and page number will appear in every page header after page one automatically.
Phew! Your done!
For an example of what your final product might look like, see the book version of my Crash Course.
If you’re taking my online crash course, you may return to step three.























I really appreciate you taking the time to share this technical information. Headers are something I’ve been toying with for a while now, and you’ve made them so easy to understand. Thanks for giving me one less thing to stress about.
You’re welcome!
This info and your website are incredible! Do you have any information about how to format a picture book manuscript? I’m confused as to whether a page should be used for every page of the book but that seems wrong. I am trying to format for the upcoming free-tique…help!
The article above is how you format a picture book manuscript as well. There is no need to actually break the page where you think the page breaks are. A common mistake for many new writers. Doing so (unless you know the editor has some strange preference for seeing it that way) will flag you as an amateur. The STANDARD PRACTICE is to write your text like any other manuscript. Leave the page turns up to the editor to decide.)
Hi Cynthea
I have a quick question for you - well maybe the question isn’t quick but hopefully is quick to answer
I am in Australia, we have a publisher that does “Aussie Nibbles” their description is as follows:
“manuscripts should be around 1200 to 1500 words, with an interest level for six to eight year-olds as they tackle their first chapter books”
My question with this description in mind is: would you format the story into chapters or leave that up to the editor &\or illustrator (as I would imagine there would be significant illustrations in this type of books). I can divide my book into “chapters” of a couple of hundred words quite easily but not sure if it looks strange having 1-2 pages per chapter.
Thanks
In chapter books, it’s very common for chapters to be short (1-2 manuscript pages or longer, depending on the book.) Your best bet is to look at Aussie Nibbles and see if their existing books are chaptered - how long is each chapter? Try to model their books as much as possible to increase your chances of your manuscript fitting into the line.
Hope that helps! Sorry it took me so long to respond. Somehow I missed this one.
Cynthea