Comments on: revision 9-1-1 for fiction picture books http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/19/92/revision-9-1-1-for-fiction-picture-books/ by Cynthea Liu Thu, 11 Mar 2010 08:51:59 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 By: Cynthea http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/19/92/revision-9-1-1-for-fiction-picture-books/comment-page-1/#comment-5677 Cynthea Thu, 08 Mar 2007 16:56:21 +0000 http://cynthealiu.com/?p=92#comment-5677 Thank you! Thank you!

]]> By: Maureen Brady Johnson http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/19/92/revision-9-1-1-for-fiction-picture-books/comment-page-1/#comment-5414 Maureen Brady Johnson Sun, 04 Mar 2007 12:01:56 +0000 http://cynthealiu.com/?p=92#comment-5414 my e-mail was messed up when i forgot to 'shift' for the @ sign...sorry my e-mail was messed up when i forgot to ’shift’ for the @ sign…sorry

]]> By: Maureen Brady Johnson http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/19/92/revision-9-1-1-for-fiction-picture-books/comment-page-1/#comment-5413 Maureen Brady Johnson Sun, 04 Mar 2007 12:01:06 +0000 http://cynthealiu.com/?p=92#comment-5413 Incredibly clear explanation! Love the rhythm idea...much like the rhythm of a play...quite wonderful. MBJ Incredibly clear explanation! Love the rhythm idea…much like the rhythm of a play…quite wonderful.
MBJ

]]> By: Erin R. http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/19/92/revision-9-1-1-for-fiction-picture-books/comment-page-1/#comment-222 Erin R. Tue, 01 Aug 2006 02:24:47 +0000 http://cynthealiu.com/?p=92#comment-222 Thanks for the very interesting tips...the 1/5-3/5-1/5th rule makes perfect sense, just never thought of it that way. You've made the basics for a picture book into a nice little package...exactly what I need! Thanks for the very interesting tips…the 1/5-3/5-1/5th rule makes perfect sense, just never thought of it that way. You’ve made the basics for a picture book into a nice little package…exactly what I need!

]]> By: Cynthea http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/19/92/revision-9-1-1-for-fiction-picture-books/comment-page-1/#comment-43 Cynthea Sat, 24 Jun 2006 18:16:46 +0000 http://cynthealiu.com/?p=92#comment-43 You're welcome! You’re welcome!

]]> By: DeAnn M. O. http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/19/92/revision-9-1-1-for-fiction-picture-books/comment-page-1/#comment-31 DeAnn M. O. Wed, 21 Jun 2006 04:29:02 +0000 http://cynthealiu.com/?p=92#comment-31 I've thought about PBs as needing a rhythm, but you spelled it out in a way that had never completely gelled in my mind before. (Both of my parents were music teachers, so this may be why I'm so drawn to picture books and their melodies. It was neat to realize this as I was reading.) What a wonderful resource this is. Thanks, Cynthea! I’ve thought about PBs as needing a rhythm, but you spelled it out in a way that had never completely gelled in my mind before. (Both of my parents were music teachers, so this may be why I’m so drawn to picture books and their melodies. It was neat to realize this as I was reading.)

What a wonderful resource this is. Thanks, Cynthea!

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