Comments on: revision 9-1-1 for novels: plot

By: Cynthea

Cynthea — Tue, 27 Jun 2006 22:14:43 +0000

Gotcha! Will do.

By: Bubba

Bubba — Sun, 25 Jun 2006 00:42:17 +0000

American Licorice (with Kelloggs)
makes “Twistables”…
Try ‘em!

By: Cynthea

Cynthea — Sat, 24 Jun 2006 18:15:29 +0000

Hahaha! I love Red Vines!!!! (they are way cherrier than Twizzlers.) However the pulling and twisting action of the Pull N’ Peel is a lot of fun. Does American Licorice have plans for the Twist N’ Twirl? I’d like that.

By: Cynthea

Cynthea — Sat, 24 Jun 2006 18:11:59 +0000

Brilliant?! I likey. Thank you!

By: Cynthea

Cynthea — Sat, 24 Jun 2006 18:11:33 +0000

I’m glad the article helped! Happy revising!

By: Cynthea

Cynthea — Sat, 24 Jun 2006 18:10:11 +0000

Your welcome!

By: Bubba

Bubba — Sat, 24 Jun 2006 14:35:00 +0000

My ONLY objection is the reference to
Pull-n-Peel Twizzlers.
My family company is AMERICAN LICORICE,
makers of RED VINES.
I think even the word “vine” is sooooooooo
much more visually accurate;)
Don’t you think?????
Thanks Cyn.
I recognised a few of my own writing faux pas in
these ‘graphs!!!
Eep!

By: Alexandra

Alexandra — Sat, 24 Jun 2006 10:29:59 +0000

Thanks Cynthea, these posts are brilliant.

By: Heather

Heather — Fri, 23 Jun 2006 21:24:50 +0000

Great article. For some time I have been wondering if I need to start my mg off with more action or if I need the first part so readers will care about the characters. I will reread/revise it, with what you have said in mind. Thanks.

By: Barb

Barb — Fri, 23 Jun 2006 19:18:33 +0000

Thanks for an interesting look at plot revision, Cynthea.