http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/26/101/revision-9-1-1-for-novels-setting-and-description/ by Cynthea Liu Thu, 11 Mar 2010 08:51:59 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/26/101/revision-9-1-1-for-novels-setting-and-description/comment-page-1/#comment-60438 Basia Belroy Tue, 31 Mar 2009 00:17:11 +0000 http://www.cynthealiu.com/?p=101#comment-60438 I just wanted to say I'm really enjoying the RLGL right now. I just wanted to say thank you for your advice in 9-l-l for novels: setting and description. I've read so many good books and gone to many conferences, but your suggestions in this section were eye-openers. I went back and looked at the beginning chapter of my YA murder mystery and was able to cut 12 pages down to 7, so the body is found much sooner. It has really made a huge difference. Also, I love the RLGL because when we can only email Snoop 1 page at a time, it really forces me to examine how compelling that page really is--thank you so much for your help. I'm so happy I found your website! I just wanted to say I’m really enjoying the RLGL right now. I just wanted to say thank you for your advice in 9-l-l for novels: setting and description. I’ve read so many good books and gone to many conferences, but your suggestions in this section were eye-openers. I went back and looked at the beginning chapter of my YA murder mystery and was able to cut 12 pages down to 7, so the body is found much sooner. It has really made a huge difference. Also, I love the RLGL because when we can only email Snoop 1 page at a time, it really forces me to examine how compelling that page really is–thank you so much for your help. I’m so happy I found your website!

]]> http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/26/101/revision-9-1-1-for-novels-setting-and-description/comment-page-1/#comment-156 Cynthea Thu, 20 Jul 2006 15:53:27 +0000 http://www.cynthealiu.com/?p=101#comment-156 No doubt! There's a med for everything. If one of the pharma companies reads these articles---watch out! No doubt! There’s a med for everything. If one of the pharma companies reads these articles—watch out!

]]> http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/26/101/revision-9-1-1-for-novels-setting-and-description/comment-page-1/#comment-70 Kelly Fineman Sun, 02 Jul 2006 03:15:54 +0000 http://www.cynthealiu.com/?p=101#comment-70 I sure hope I'm not a chronic plopper. Although I believe there's a new IBS med that might help, if I were. I sure hope I’m not a chronic plopper. Although I believe there’s a new IBS med that might help, if I were.

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