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	<title>Comments on: revision 9-1-1: writing mechanics</title>
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	<description>by Cynthea Liu</description>
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		<title>By: cynthea</title>
		<link>http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/27/105/revision-9-1-1-writing-mechanics/comment-page-1/#comment-34786</link>
		<dc:creator>cynthea</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Nov 2007 21:12:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the praise!  So happy this article was helpful to you.  Good luck with your manuscript!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the praise!  So happy this article was helpful to you.  Good luck with your manuscript!</p>
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		<title>By: Sarah I</title>
		<link>http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/27/105/revision-9-1-1-writing-mechanics/comment-page-1/#comment-33653</link>
		<dc:creator>Sarah I</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 11 Nov 2007 17:51:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>A couple years ago, I wouldn&#039;t have been ready for this advice or understood it very well.  THANK YOU for your attention to detail, solutions, and assistance.  I&#039;ve read all the books and I have reached the final stages of my manuscript; your instructions are helping put some polish on those (hopefully!) final rough edges of my work.  Blessings.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>A couple years ago, I wouldn&#8217;t have been ready for this advice or understood it very well.  THANK YOU for your attention to detail, solutions, and assistance.  I&#8217;ve read all the books and I have reached the final stages of my manuscript; your instructions are helping put some polish on those (hopefully!) final rough edges of my work.  Blessings.</p>
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		<title>By: Cynthea</title>
		<link>http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/27/105/revision-9-1-1-writing-mechanics/comment-page-1/#comment-5678</link>
		<dc:creator>Cynthea</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 08 Mar 2007 17:18:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you! So flattering to hear these words from an editor! Whooboy.

I feel *proud*.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you! So flattering to hear these words from an editor! Whooboy.</p>
<p>I feel *proud*.</p>
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		<title>By: Madeline Smoot</title>
		<link>http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/27/105/revision-9-1-1-writing-mechanics/comment-page-1/#comment-5403</link>
		<dc:creator>Madeline Smoot</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 04 Mar 2007 05:33:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you so much for reiterating the things we&#039;ve all been trying to tell writers all along.  And it&#039;s so true.  If we don&#039;t think the author can revise, it doesn&#039;t matter how great the plot (or character, etc) is — we just don&#039;t have the resources to work with it.  I&#039;m glad to have found your site, and I shall reccommend.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you so much for reiterating the things we&#8217;ve all been trying to tell writers all along.  And it&#8217;s so true.  If we don&#8217;t think the author can revise, it doesn&#8217;t matter how great the plot (or character, etc) is — we just don&#8217;t have the resources to work with it.  I&#8217;m glad to have found your site, and I shall reccommend.</p>
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		<title>By: Cynthea</title>
		<link>http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/27/105/revision-9-1-1-writing-mechanics/comment-page-1/#comment-177</link>
		<dc:creator>Cynthea</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 Jul 2006 14:55:16 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>You&#039;re welcome!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>You&#8217;re welcome!</p>
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		<title>By: Barb/aka howlingsquash</title>
		<link>http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/27/105/revision-9-1-1-writing-mechanics/comment-page-1/#comment-69</link>
		<dc:creator>Barb/aka howlingsquash</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Jun 2006 22:00:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Who&#039;d have known participial phrases could kill! Thanks, Cynthea. I&#039;m guilty.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Who&#8217;d have known participial phrases could kill! Thanks, Cynthea. I&#8217;m guilty.</p>
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		<title>By: Cynthea</title>
		<link>http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/27/105/revision-9-1-1-writing-mechanics/comment-page-1/#comment-64</link>
		<dc:creator>Cynthea</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Jun 2006 20:13:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Neato! When I get some time I will play around with this. Maybe it could save my voice!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Neato! When I get some time I will play around with this. Maybe it could save my voice!</p>
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		<title>By: Alexandra</title>
		<link>http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/27/105/revision-9-1-1-writing-mechanics/comment-page-1/#comment-61</link>
		<dc:creator>Alexandra</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Jun 2006 18:26:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Interesting about the reading out loud.  Someone in my writing group suggested a text reader for those who found it hard to do so, there&#039;s one on http://www.naturalreaders.com/ that can be used for free.  Thought I&#039;d pass it on for any other readers who are scared of reading to themselves like I am!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Interesting about the reading out loud.  Someone in my writing group suggested a text reader for those who found it hard to do so, there&#8217;s one on <a href="http://www.naturalreaders.com/" rel="nofollow">http://www.naturalreaders.com/</a> that can be used for free.  Thought I&#8217;d pass it on for any other readers who are scared of reading to themselves like I am!</p>
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		<title>By: Cynthea</title>
		<link>http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/27/105/revision-9-1-1-writing-mechanics/comment-page-1/#comment-51</link>
		<dc:creator>Cynthea</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Jun 2006 19:18:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Rock on, Barb!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Rock on, Barb!</p>
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		<title>By: Barb</title>
		<link>http://www.writingforchildrenandteens.com/2006/06/27/105/revision-9-1-1-writing-mechanics/comment-page-1/#comment-50</link>
		<dc:creator>Barb</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Jun 2006 19:12:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Cynthea. I&#039;m off to chop some adjectives.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Cynthea. I&#8217;m off to chop some adjectives.</p>
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