Comments on: still working on it!

By: Paula

Paula — Fri, 11 Jan 2008 20:21:18 +0000

Wow, 100 and you’re still giving a thorough critique. This was my first from you and even for such a short snippet, you really took your time with it. Thanks for the helpful input and the precious time. I’m off to weave some edits…

By: Lori

Lori — Fri, 11 Jan 2008 01:46:04 +0000

Thanks so much for the free-tique. What a great thing to offer. I loved all your comments and they gave me inspiration to revise, and revise some more…! The story’s coming together. Thank you, Thank you, Thank you!

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By: Liz

Liz — Thu, 10 Jan 2008 19:51:19 +0000

Thanks again for the freetique. You hit on something that I had never thought to watch for (mood shifts), and you validated my own instincts on something else that I wasn’t sure I liked, but hadn’t yet changed.

I thank you, and my story thanks you!

By: Marie

Marie — Thu, 10 Jan 2008 05:17:54 +0000

The freetique was very helpful. I’ll work on it and hopefully the opening to my story will be greenish next time.

Thank you, Cynthea!

By: Jeanne

Jeanne — Tue, 08 Jan 2008 18:19:48 +0000

Wow! Nearly 100? I was wondering how many you would get.

I’ll be waiting more patiently now.

Thanks.