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1. Thanks for an interesting look at plot revision, Cynthea.

2. Great article. For some time I have been wondering if I need to start my mg off with more action or if I need the first part so readers will care about the characters. I will reread/revise it, with what you have said in mind. Thanks.

3. Thanks Cynthea, these posts are brilliant.

4. My ONLY objection is the reference to
   Pull-n-Peel Twizzlers.
   My family company is AMERICAN LICORICE,
   makers of RED VINES.
   I think even the word “vine” is sooooooooo
   much more visually accurate;)
   Don’t you think?????
   Thanks Cyn.
   I recognised a few of my own writing faux pas in
   these ‘graphs!!!
   Eep!

5. Your welcome!

6. I’m glad the article helped! Happy revising!

7. Brilliant?! I likey. Thank you!

8. Hahaha! I love Red Vines!!!! (they are way cherrier than Twizzlers.) However the pulling and twisting action of the Pull N’ Peel is a lot of fun. Does American Licorice have plans for the Twist N’ Twirl? I’d like that. 🙂

9. American Licorice (with Kelloggs)
   makes “Twistables”…
   Try ’em!

10. Gotcha! Will do.